20xx考研英语作文万能模式(编辑修改稿)内容摘要:

family and buy houses which are too expensive to afford. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. 中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害, 并举例论证,预测 危害的趋势 To account for the abovementioned phenomenon, several reasons have been put forward. To begin with, the first stessmaker is petition. Nowadays may people, who have a strong careermind are involved in a fierce petion for money, ranks,and fame. In the rat race, they try every means to stay on the top and keep on working until they can hardly addition, the reason why they are suffering a great pain is that they have such a great ambition to succeed and want to acplish their goals in the shortest possible time. Just because of their ambitionw, they put great great pressures on themselves and have no time for relaxation to enjoy better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . According to a survey made by China Daily, % of young people who have once tasted the stress are being physically or mentally ill. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may e out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our heritage left by our ancesters. 最后一段要强调解决问题,谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识,加强执法; From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent the stress damaging the the health of most people. On the one hand, we should be sensible to develop a positive attitude towards petition. That is, petition is not the ultimate goal of life, but a driving force that motivates us to fulfill our dreams On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of developing a schedule which includes enough time for rest and other important values. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later. 人类社会的永恒话题 , 对比论述突出好处 ,比如坚持不懈 , 打败自我 ,团队精神 ,为人真诚 ,实事求是从正面列举该积极事物的好处 ,克服困难 , 征服挑战 , 完善自我 ,走向成功 ,创造辉煌从反面列举没有 这个积极事物时的不好 , 郁闷迷茫 , 无成就感和前进动力 , 失败挫折感最后要谈两点建议措施和联想美好未来 . 话题:坚持不懈 在失败的时候坚持 , 做好每一件小事为成功做好准备 . 首段:四句话,描述图画,表明图画发人深思。 As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述图画 . The most striking feature is 图画重点信息 . 描述图画两句,第一句宏观表明图画的视觉效果。 第二句表明的图画的最大特色是什么。 There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. 此句子表明图画所微妙传达的象征含义,发人深思,十四个单词增加亮点,弥补首段字数不足,为下文点名观点作好铺垫 Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon that which plays an active part in our society. 二段:七句话,揭示象征含义,从正反两方面论述该积极事物的重要性。 从正面列举该积极事物的好处 ,克服困难 , 征服挑战 , 完善自我 ,走向成功 ,创造辉煌从反面列举没有这个积极事物时的不好 , 郁闷迷茫 , 无成就感和前进动力 , 失败挫折感,而且要举例证明使观点具体化,并以倒装并列句结尾,画龙点睛。 As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重复上面的图画信息 profoundly indicates that perseverance is momentous (重要的 ) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great ,成功是衡量该话题是否积极的唯一标准。 该段首句设置爆发力句型,增加气势,让老师给出很高的第一印象分,借此开头很有特色。 Perseverance means that people can persist on when they face the difficulty and prepare every detail for the ing :毅力 —在困境中坚持,做好细节,准备成功; It is perseverance that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable , that makes us still full of energy to face the ing challenges and petition and that offers us the foundation for the ing ,大气磅礴。 此万能句子是任何积极事物都可以帮助我们克服困难 ,征服挑战 ,走向成功 . Unless we stick to our dream,(适当把主题词进行同义替换 )we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. 双重否定句子从反面论证宏观说明危害性,如果缺乏该积极事物就生活郁闷挫折被竞争所淘汰。 To account for the above mentioned topic, several reasons can be put forward as mentioned below. To begin with In addition Last but not the least No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (举例证明把 for example 写成十四个很有特色,而且表明下面的例子很重要,又增加一分,老师看了这么多 for example,审美疲劳,老师一看该句,一定激动。 Many capable people who have the burning desire to win fail to achieve their goals just because they don’t persist (是坚持的同意改写 )especially when they face the music. Many people who。 just because。 想成功但失败因为他们不能坚持特别是遇到困难的时候, Only by being perseverant can they guarantee a success and have a strong will to always challenge 倒装并列句在段落末尾写,增加气势,第二段结尾很重要,不要晚节不保。 倒装句在 结尾补充再好不过。 此句很万能,表明只有该积极事物让我们永远成功; 三: 5—6句话,承上启下总结上文,两点建议,展望美好未来 From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to persevere than to despair. From。 承上启下 , 引起下文 , 多达二十五个单词的总结句 表明无论做大事小事,难事容易事,都需要积极事物支持我们。 It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to cultivate confidence and to pursue the ing goals. 建议措施的总起句子 , 引起下文,被动句子很有风采 . On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine about the colorful future. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to punish ourselves in certain ways if we fail to hold on to our dream. 结构很清晰 ,sensible 表明建议很理性 , 从反方面再谈很辨证 . However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. 这个闪光的万能句多达 25个单词,强调实践的重要性 .而且还有谚语 ,表明建议用于实践。 话题二:打败自我,不断改正自身缺陷吸收别人长处,完善自我,自信面对人生; 1Defeating ourselves or Defeating others Defeating ourselvesfig。
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