gmat作文模板aa54-coffeeofexcelsiorandsuperior(编辑修改稿)

gmat作文模板aa54-coffeeofexcelsiorandsuperior(编辑修改稿)内容摘要：

perceived the sales as good deals. The same name effect may not exist for Excelsior and customers can perceive its products as low quality if free samples are offered. Accordingly, we can see that the Excelsior is unlikely to achieve the same results if it simply adopts the Superior’s sales strategies. To conclude, the author’s argument is not persuasive as it stands. It is imprudent for the author to claim that the Excelsior will gain customers using the sales strategies from Superior. To strengthen the argument, the author would have to provide evidence that Excelsior can actually afford and sustain a sales promotion that can last long enough to gain customers. Furthermore, to solidify the conclusion, the author should also provide concrete evidence that customers have historically reacted positively to sales promotions from Excelsior. Only with more convincing evidence could this argument bee more than just an emotional appeal.Examples from Gmatclub:Total Score 5Analyzes the issue 5Supports ideas 5Organizes a coherent idea 5Language control 6The author proposes that。