第一章写作对策：(编辑修改稿)

第一章写作对策：(编辑修改稿)内容摘要：

children because＿ . Moreover, ＿ . ☆ 某种做法与支持这种做法的观点。 After careful consideration ,I have to say the above view is more than biased. On the one hand, ＿ .on the other hand ,＿ . ☆ 从两方面进行批驳；第一句批驳。 We can see clearly that although＿ may bring favorable results， there are still a lot to worry about .It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investgation before ＿ . ☆ 下结论。 My view on teenagers’ studying abroad Recently it seems that among the students who choose to study abroad ， there are more and more teenagers who study in high school or even elementary schools .Many people ，especially the parents， think it will certainly do good to their children because the independent life will make them learn confidence and ， the quality of overseas education is often higher ， thus the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future。 After careful consideration ， I have to say the above view is more than biased . On the other hand , early independent life is not necessarily good ， if the child cannot receive proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. On the other hand , the educational quality is also a question —— too many foreign universities aim at earning money . When the children e back ， who can guarantee that they adapt to the fierce petition here。 We can see clearly that although teenagers’ studying abroad may bring favorable results， there are still a lot to worry about .It seems necessary for young students to make a。