第十五讲高分作文的写作模式2(编辑修改稿)

第十五讲高分作文的写作模式2(编辑修改稿)内容摘要：

. Working several hours a day consumes a lot of time and energy and may affect their studies. As a result, they may find it hard to adjust to what the college expects of them as well as their employers expect, and finally, they may fall behind or fail in their studies. In my opinion, students can choose to take up a parttime job according to their own situation. The most important thing for them is to keep a good balance between parttime jobs and his study. 谋篇布局（ 3） 将提示的第一句和第二句合为第一段，于段尾提出自己的观点； 说明自己的理由； 结 论段总结全文 例文 标题： How to Achieve Success 提纲： 1）有人说成功主要靠运气； 2）有人则认为成功主要靠勤奋，与运气毫无关系。 3）我的观点 Some people say the key to success is the luck, while others claim it is hard work. As far as I am concerned, there are many factors contributing to success and the three fundamental ones are diligence, devotion and perseverance. Diligence is the first key factor to success. Diligence helps us remove ignorance, overe difficulties, and enlighten our minds. It makes a fool wise, and a poor man rich. Devotion is another factor to success. Whatever we do, we must love it and do it wholeheartedly. Only when we set our minds on the job, can we do it well. Furthermore, perseverance, or a strong will, is the last key to success. Without a strong will, we are likely to give up when we meet some difficulties, let alone perform wonderful deeds. 最新下载 () 中国最大。