[初一英语]初中英语写作校本课程开发方案

[初一英语]初中英语写作校本课程开发方案内容摘要：

loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released. 这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。 原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把 悬念 给冲淡了。 可作如下调整 : I was in the kitchen cooking something. Crash! a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, Who? No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. It39。 s you. I said, quite released. 11 二、写好记叙文的基本要领 1. 头绪分明，脉络清楚 写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。 要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。 这些素材都应该跟上述五个 W 和一个 H 有关。 尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些 W 和 H ，但动笔之前，围绕五个 W 和 H 进行构思是必不可少的。 2. 突出中心，详略得当 在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。 选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。 要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。 面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。 这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。 如 : One night a man came to our house and told me, There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days. I took some food with me and went. When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger. I gave the rice to the mother. She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice. When she came back, I asked her, Where did you go? she gave me this simple answer, To my neighbors they are hungry also! 3. 用活语言，准确生动 记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。 一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。 试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。 原文 : One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away. He was soon lost among people and traffic. He could not find the way back home and started crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying. They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened. Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived. The two students 12 decided to take him home. Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang e back safe and sound. She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn39。 t take it. She served them with tea but they left. 修改后 : The other day, fiveyearold Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. When he could not find the way home, he started and crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. They immediately went up to him. Little boy, why are you standing here crying? they asked. I want Mom, I go home. said the boy, still crying. Don39。 t worry, we39。 ll send you home. And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy39。 s house. With the help of a policeman, they finally found it. When the worried mother saw her son e back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house. Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea. 写作练 习 1. 请用所给词的正确形式完成下文 It39。 s seven o39。 clock on the morning of June 1st. Tom 1＿＿＿＿＿（ get） up. He 2＿＿＿＿（ put） on his clothes and his shoes. He 3＿＿＿＿（ go） to the zoo with his classmates and his teachers. His mother 4＿＿＿ (be) busy 5＿＿＿＿＿（ cook） breakfast for him. His father 6＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿（ prepare）for his trip. He 7＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿（ put） some food, some fruit and a bottle of water into his son39。 s bag now. 2 .Peter 是加拿大留学生，他在课堂上听不懂老师用汉语讲课。 假如你是李英，请给他写封 ，简单介绍你学习英语的方法和体会，并针对他的困难提出两至三条学习汉语的建议。 提示词语： study with a group, think, help, listen to, watch 注意事项 :词数不少 于 60 字。 提示词语仅供选用。 文中不得写出自己的真实姓名和所在班级 Dear Peter, 13 I‟m sorry to hear that you have some trouble learning Chinese. I have some ideas that may help. For example, I always improve my English by studying with a group. Sometimes I also read aloud to practice my pronunciation. However, I think the best way is to watch English movies, because I can watch the actors say the Chinese is about the same. If I were you, I‟d watch Chinese movies. Also you can listen to tapes as much as possible or join a Chinese club to talk to your friends. I hope you will have fun learning Chinese. Good luck! Love, Li Ying 3. 每个人都有自己的喜好。 请你从课余生活方面，谈谈你最喜欢什么和原因。 你又有什么设想或打算。 以及你将具体如何准备呢。 After school, I like playing with small animals. Dogs make the best pets. They‟re loyal to people. In the future, I want to be a vet (an animal doctor) so that I can put my interest to good use. It‟s all I‟ve ever wanted to can I make my dream e true? First, I‟ll keep a dog in my house and look after her carefully. In my spare time, I‟ll take her for walks, clean her bed, wash her bowl, and train her. Life with her must be perfect. From now on, I‟ll surely study harder to know more about animals. 4. 每个人都有自己的喜好。 请你从课内学科方面，谈谈你最喜欢的科目是什么 ,为什么。 有什么设想或打算。 你又将如何准备呢。 I learn many subjects at school. I like English best because it‟s interesting and easy. In the future, I want to be an English reporter, so that I can put my interest to good use. How can I make my dream e true? I‟ll surely study harder. First, I‟m going to read more English magazines to improve my English reading skills. Besides, English clubs are good places to improve my spoken English, so I‟ll join one and practice every day. In a word, I‟ll try my best to make progress in English. 5. 临近初三毕业，你的生活一定是紧张而快乐的，请以 My School Day 为话题，写下你初中的生活中经典的一天，并写下你对初中生活的感言。 提示词语： busy, happy, help, homework, future My School Day I‟ll say bye to my school soon, so these days I‟m pretty busy with my preparation 14 work. E。