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photos with the elephants. But we liked the monkeys best, because monkeys were very clever and naughty. They made us laugh a lot. We had a piic on the grass and played some games. We had a good time. I really liked the trip to Shanghai Zoo. (80 words) II. Writing An Opinion We should not watch too much TV I think we should not watch too much TV. Firstly, it is not good for our eyes. If we sit in front of the TV set for a long time, we will bee short sighted very easily and quickly. Secondly, some TV programs are not suitable for us. They may cause us to do bad things. Thirdly, Watching TV for too much time means wasting a lot of time. We will have no time to finish our homework. So in my opinion, we should not watch TV for a long time. (91 words) What is the Topic Sentence? What are the Supporting Sentences? What is the Concluding Sentence? Discussion: It is unnecessary for a student to use a mobile Topic Sentence: Supporting Sentences: Concluding Sentence: It is unnecessary for a student to use a mobile. Nowadays more and more students have got mobile phones. But I think it is unnecessary for a student to use a mobile. First, most students use mobiles to send short messages each other or even play games. It is。