雅思写作-小作文辅导-如何描述柱状图

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es given for male parttime workers, but female parttimers had forty hours of leisure time, only slightly more than women in fulltime employment, perhaps reflecting their work in the home. In the unemployed and retired categories, leisure time showed an increase for both sexes, as might have been expected. Here too, men enjoyed more leisure time – over eight hours, pared with seventy hours for women, perhaps once again reflecting the fact that women spend more time working in the home than men. Lastly, housewives enjoyed approximately fiftyfour hours of leisure, on average. There were no figures given for househusbands! Overall, the chart demonstrates that in the categories for which statistics on male leisure time were available, men enjoyed at least ten hours of extra leisure time. 分析 ： 题目 The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. ? 简单的题目，但是把文章的三个指标都给谈到了，时间 the amount of leisure time, 性别 by men and women，工作种类 of different employment status 第一段 The chart shows the number of hours enjoyed by men and women in a typical week in 1998 – 9, according to gender and employment status. ? 典型的通过改写题目，提示图表的内容 ? 看作者是如何谈论三个指标的，时间 the number of hours, 性别 men and women, 工作种类 according to gender and employment status（再次谈到了性别），另外补充说明了图形标题的一点内容 in a typical week in 1998 – 9. 第二段 Among those employed fulltime, men on average had fifty hours of leisure, whereas women had approximately thirtyseven hours. ? 用一个 whereas 连词，对比说明了 men和 women的时间情形， ? 工作组别信息： among those employed fulltime ? 性别信息： men, women ? 时间信息： had fifty hours of leisure, had thirtyseven hours ? 表示平均 on average, 表示大约 approximately There were no figures given for male parttime workers, but female parttimers had forty hours of leisure time, only slightly more than women in fulltime employment, perhaps reflecting their work in the home. ? 这句话说明了两点内容，第一是 parttime workers 的情况，第二是与 fulltime employment作了比较 ? 工作组别和性别信息： for male parttime workers, female parttimers ? 时间信息： There were no figures given (表示缺失值 )， had forty hours of leisure time ? 比较 parttime和 fulltime妇女的休息时间 （ Female parttimers had） only slightly more than women in fulltime ? employment, 注意短语的逻辑主语，还有必须注意 parttime和 fulltime妇女的不同表示法 ? 适度的评价， perhaps reflecting their work in the home, 这句其逻辑主语为前面那句 only slight more than women ? in fulltime employment，这句话的含义是 “虽然为 parttime females, 但是相应的承担了更多的家务，所以休息时间只 ? 是 比 fulltime females 多那么一点点 ” ? 很多同学争论需不需要发表议论，准确的说应当是就图论图，不作评价，但是这个原则也不是死的，根据图形的特征，作一点适当的评论也是可以的，这里就是 “适度评价 ” 第三段 In the unemployed and retired categories, leisure time showed an increase for both sexes, as might have been expected. ? 这句将 unemployed and retired categories 这两个组和其他组别比较的特征做了说明，图上也很明显，这两组人的 leisure time非常多， ? as might have been expected, as 为代词，指代前面这句话内容，意思为 “正如 ”；这是个插入语，经常用到 Here too, men enjoyed more leisure time – over eight hours, pared with seventy hours for women, perhaps once again reflecting the fact that women spend more time working in the home than men. ? 说明了 men和 women的比较，比较词为 pared with ? (Eight hours are) pared with seventy hours, 注意比较的成分应当是对等的，时间对应时间， pare这个词在 雅思写作中以被动态比较常见，很少出现 paring with的形式，切记 第四段 Lastly, housewives enjoyed approximately fiftyfour hours of leisure, on average. There were no figures given for househusbands! ? 说明了 housewives 的 leisure time，很明显， househusbands 为缺失值 Overall, the chart demonstrates that in the categories for which statistics on male leisure time were available, men enjoyed at least ten hours of extra leisure time. ? Overall 代表是文章的总结句，但是作者从另外一个逻辑角度，即按照总体性别来看， men比 women的 leisure time要多，这就说明了应当按照清晰的逻辑顺序，把文章中各个信息都需要描述 词汇句型积累 对比说明 两个事物的对比说明，这是必考内容之一，所采用的方法有 ? 采用 连词 while, whereas ? 还可以用 pared with过去分词短语 来补充说明对比关系 ? 还有一种就是用 比较句型 mor。