雅思写作－小作文范文－表格

雅思写作－小作文范文－表格内容摘要：

On average, 11% of all households, prising almost two million people, were in this position. However, those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively. Couples generally tended to the better off, with lower poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). It is noticeable that for both types of household with children, a higher than average proportion were living in poverty at this time. Older people were generally less likely to be poor, though once again the trend favored elderly couples (only 4%) rather than single elderly people (6%). Overall the table suggests that households of single adults and those with children were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples. 分析 ： 题目 The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make parisons where relevant.  看看题目的要求 main features 和 parisons, 这也是雅思图表作文的常规的要求 开头段 The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.  标准的 图表作文格式，提示图表内容，写作手法就是改写题目（一定要改写，照抄扣分），下面我们对照改写部分：  The table below shows 改为 The table gives  the proportion 改为 a breakdown  different categories 改为 different types  living in poverty 现在分词作定语改为定语从句 who were living in poverty  作者改写方式很简单，也很实用，就是简单的近义词替换 主体一段 On average, 11% of all households, prising almost two million people, were in this position.  on average引出了平均值的介绍， sb is in this position  在整体与部分的表达中，有两类词组，需要特别注意  包括 整体 包括 部分： consist of, prise, include  组成 部分 组成 整体 make up, pose, constitute However, those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively.  指出极端值  one parent or a single adult 文中指的就是 young adults,  double 词性为 前位限定词 ，就是放在冠词之前的词，常见的结构为 double the number/amount/size, 如 We will need double this amount for eight people, double 还可替换为 a quarter 四分之一 , half一半 , twice两倍 , triple三倍 , three times 三倍 主体二段 Couples generally tended to the better off, with lower poverty levels for couple。