高三英语开放作文课件

高三英语开放作文课件内容摘要：

when the bird is getting better, we let it free. 缺乏细节 3. One day in the afternoon, Wang Ping and I were playing happily in the woods. We were playing balls and suddenly the ball ran to the other side of the road. I hurried to get it when I saw a bird lying there and I found it was wounded. We quickly took it to the hospital and the doctor gave the bird some medicine and we took it back home then. It was getting better and better and we decided to set it free the next day. i t t , ang Ping and I ere i l i t 缺乏主次 离题话偏多 重复原文 4. Wang Ping told me that he was a little hungry and we could eat the bird. I agreed with him and we found some dry wood and put it together. Then we cooked the bird. It was really delicious. What a happy day. put 思想格调不高 开放作文的写作要领： 1. 认真审题，即：审情景，人称，时态，抓关键词 2. 大脑风暴：发散思维，尽可能想出多的思路 3. 紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应 4. 注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者意识 5. 要进行细节描写 6. 要力求内容新颖，逻辑合理 7. 要做到思想健康，积极向上 8. 注意语言表达的准确性 You and your friend are in your room. He finds one of the windows is broken and says, “Your window is broken. What happened?” You tell him what happened. ( 03 北京高考样题） 1. 认真审题 情景： 时态： 人称： 关键词： 你所面对的对象是你的朋友。 他在你的家里。 他发现你家的玻璃碎了，问其原因。 What happened 过去时 第一人称 / 其他人称 不能用第二人称 in your room, window, broken, what happened 2. 大脑风暴 A football broke the window. A thief broke the window. My parents quarreled and threw a vase to the window. A hardcover book was thrown out of the window. An earthquake happened. … 选出自己熟悉的，容易发挥的，新颖的素材 3. 紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应 题目要求写出 “ 玻璃是怎么碎的 ” ，所以全文都要围绕 “ 碎 ” 来写 4. 注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者意识 交流的对象是你的朋友，交流的内容是玻璃碎的原因，所以要用口语化的语言 5. 要进行细节描写 It was I who broke it. I felt very sorry about it. 文章必须要回答 how ，逻辑合理 应力求避开大众化的想法，写出富有创造性的文章。 但不能违背逻辑。 My father and I were doing the paper – folding games. We folded a lot of paper planes. When we tested which one could fly higher, one of the paper planes hit the window. And my window was broken. ，积极向上 教育就是要把学生培养成对社会有益的好公民。 写作要遵循的指导思想就是中学生应该做的、应该想的一些行为准则。 基本功 开放作文的写作要领： 1. 认真审题，即：审情景，人称，时态，抓关键词。