20xx牛津上海版一起六上unit3spndingadayouttogetherppt课件2

20xx牛津上海版一起六上unit3spndingadayouttogetherppt课件2内容摘要：

s played games in the children’s corner went boating on the lake First, things we did in Changfeng park: next , then , after that, finally A trip to Changfeng Park Last Thursday, we _______Changfeng Park the autumn outing. We _________by____. First, we___________. Next, we________. Then, that.....Finally.... it____! Homework: your trip after class and check your own trip according to the evaluation table evaluation table 评价表 评价维度 评分点 是否达成 √ 内容 包含 who, when, where,how, what 语言 运用一般过去时 运用不同句式 结构 突出 what 时间顺序 三段式 点题 书写规范 大小写，标点运用准确 I went to the Korea with my parents. Luckily, I meet my friends there. We went to there by car. At eleven thirty, we arrive there. I was visited a beautiful city in Jiangsu. It name is Yangzhou. We were drive a car go there. There is very beautiful. I like go to there. I have a good holiday. When I am three yeards old, I had a trip to Beijing. I had piic there. My friends and me were boating on it. I go to there by car, when we arrive at Hangzhou, the time is about eleven thirty. I’m happy to this trip. I was swam in the sea. I can by it go space. I am play with the bird. I am very happy to. When I finish climb it, I was very tired. It took our one hour. On summer holiday, we go to the beach. 错误分析 : : 学生没有用对时态 , 通篇都是一般现在时 ,学生在写 作时 ,没有时态的意识 .对于一般过去时的认识不够 具体化 . 学生不会正确使用过去时 ,学生对过去时的认识仅仅 是 is/am/are 变成 was/were . 动词有过去时 . 但是 到底该如何去运用 , 同学们还不太了解 . 错误有 : was visited, was swam, were drive。