第一单元作文错误

第一单元作文错误内容摘要：

at My Life Will Be Like In 20 Years［东铁营二中］ 50、 Because my dream is to travel around the world. 点评： 请检查本句完整性。 错误类型： 句子不规范 What My Life Will Be Like In 20 Years［东铁营二中］ 5 Because my dream is to travel around the world. 点评： 疑似连词开头的句子不完整。 错误类型： 句子不规范 What My Life Will Be Like In 20 Years［东铁营二中］ 5 Because I live very happy. 点评： 疑似连词开头的句子不完整。 错误类型： 句子不规范 What My Life Will Be Like In 20 Years［东铁营二中］ 5 Because I live very happy. 点评： 本句语法不规范，请检查。 错误类型： 句子不规范 What My Life Will Be Like In 20 Years［东铁营二中］ 5 Because I live very happy. 点评： 请检查本句完整性。 错误类型： 句子不规范 What My Life Will Be Like In 20 Years［东铁营二中］ 5 This is I feel very happy. 点评： 本句语法不规范，请检查。 错误类型： 句子不规范 What My Life Will Be Like In 20 Years［东铁营二中］ 5 Because our capital is Beijing and it\39。 svery big and beautiful. 点评： 本句语法不规范，请检查。 错误类型： 句子不规范 My future life［十八中西马校区］ 5 Because our capital is Beijing and it\39。 svery big and beautiful. 点评： 疑似连词开头的句子不完整。 错误类型： 句子不规范 My future life［十八中西马校区］ 5 In my spare time. 点评： 请检查句中谓语动词。 错误类型： 句子不规范 In my future life［中国教科院丰台实验学校］ 5 In my spare time. 点评： 本句语法不规范，请检查。 错误类型： 句子不规范 In my future life［中国教科院丰台实验学校］ 60、 Because I can see different view . 点评： 疑似连词开头的句子不完整。 错误类型： 句子不规范 In my future life［中国教科院丰台实验学校］ 6 So I will go swimming with my friend, listen to some music with my family, watch TV with my family. 点评： 请检查 go|listen，疑似双谓语错误。 错误类型： 句子不规范 What will my life be like in 20 years?［分院附属学校］ 6 So I will go swimming with my friend, listen to some music with my family, watch TV with my family. 点评： 本 句语法不规范，请检查。 错误类型： 句子不规范 What will my life be like in 20 years?［分院附属学校］ 6 We can use it do almost things. 点评： 本句语法不规范，请检查。 错误类型： 句子不规范 What will my life be like in 20 years?［分院附属学校］ 6 We can use it do almost things. 点评： 请检查 can|do，疑似双谓语错误。 错误类型： 句子不规范 What will my life be like in 20 years?［分院附属学校］ 6 I thinkbeing a doctor is a meaningful job. 点评： 本句语法不规范，请检查。 错误类型： 句子不规范 what my life will be like in 20 years［丰台八中］ 6 I think people will thanks me a makes me very happy 点评： 本句语法不规范，请检查。 错误类型： 句子不 规范 what my life will be like in 20 years［丰台八中］ 6 I want to be the teacher that are friends with students, so I will still talk to students face to face rather than using social media. 点评： 请检查 are，确认主谓一致。 错误类型： 句子不规范 What my life will be like in 20 years.［ 丰台二中］ 6 When I in my spare time,I will learn English lauguage. 点评： 本句语法不规范，请检查。 错误类型： 句子不规范 what my life will be in tweny years［中国教科院丰台实验学校］ 6 When I in my spare time,I will learn English lauguage. 点评： 请检查从句中的谓语动词。 错误类型： 句子不规范 what my life will be in tweny years［中国教科院丰台实验学校］ 70、 When I in my spare time,I will learn English lauguage. 点评： 请检查本句完整性。 错误类型： 句子不规范 what my life will be in tweny years［中国教科院丰台实验学校］ 7 Because I will travel around the world. 点评： 疑似连词开头的句子不完整。 错误类型： 句子不规范 what my life will be in tweny years［中国教科院丰台实验学校］ 7 Because I will travel around the world. 点评： 本句语法不规范，请检查。 错误类型： 句子不规范 what my life will be in tweny years［中国教科院丰台实验学校］ 7 Because my job is very busy. 点评： 疑似连词开头的句子不完整。 错误类型： 句子不规范 What will my life be in 20 Years［东铁营一中］ 7 Because my job is very busy. 点评： 请检查本句完整性。 错误类型： 句子不规范 What will my life be in 20 Years［东铁营一中］ 7 Because my job is very busy. 点评： 本句语法不规范，请检查。 错误类型： 句子不规范 What will my life be in 20 Years［东铁。